The essay came out better then I thought it would. My paragraphs contain more of my thoughts then I hoped they would, which is encouraging. Though I need to work on my transitions between the styles within my essay. I move from a rhetorical style to an informative style and I need to smooth out that transition a bit more. Other then that I have obligatory few typos and grammar issues but not too many which is another plus.
Monday, October 27, 2008
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